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15 Common Plot Holes and How to Fix Them

Posted on July 27, 2026July 26, 2026 By marthathurston

Few things pull readers out of a story faster than a plot hole.

A plot hole occurs when part of a story contradicts established information, ignores an obvious solution, or depends on characters behaving in ways that do not make sense. Some plot holes are small enough that readers may overlook them. Others can weaken the entire story.

The good news is that most plot holes can be repaired without rewriting your whole book. The key is identifying the missing logic and giving readers enough information to understand why events unfold the way they do.

Here are 15 common plot holes writers encounter—and practical ways to fix them.

1. The Character Forgets an Obvious Solution

Your protagonist is trapped in a building, but readers remember that she has a phone in her pocket. Your detective spends three chapters searching for information that could have been found through a simple online search.

When characters ignore an obvious solution, readers begin to feel that the author is manipulating the story.

How to Fix It

Remove the solution or explain why it cannot be used.

Perhaps the phone is damaged, the battery is dead, or the character cannot risk making a call. Maybe the information is unavailable online, has been intentionally erased, or would alert the villain if accessed.

The explanation does not need to be complicated. It simply needs to be believable.

2. The Rules of the Story Change

This problem often appears in fantasy, paranormal, science fiction, and supernatural stories.

Early in the book, readers are told that magic can only be used under certain conditions. Later, a character suddenly breaks those rules without explanation. A creature that cannot enter a protected building somehow appears inside it during the climax.

When the rules change only to serve the plot, the story loses credibility.

How to Fix It

Write down the rules of your fictional world before or during your first draft. Include:

  • What characters can and cannot do
  • The limitations of magic or technology
  • The consequences of breaking rules
  • Any exceptions that exist
  • Who knows about those exceptions

When a rule must be broken, establish the exception before it becomes important. Readers will accept surprising developments when they feel properly prepared for them.

3. A Character Knows Something They Should Not Know

A character refers to a private conversation they never witnessed. The villain knows where the protagonist is hiding even though no one revealed the location. A friend understands a secret plan that was never explained to them.

These mistakes often happen when the writer knows every part of the story and accidentally gives that knowledge to the characters.

How to Fix It

Track how each important piece of information moves through the story.

Ask:

  • Who discovered this information?
  • Who was present?
  • Who was told afterward?
  • Could anyone have overheard it?
  • Was it revealed through a letter, message, recording, or clue?

If a character needs information, create a believable way for them to obtain it.

4. A Character Fails to Share Important Information

One character discovers something that could prevent a disaster but says nothing for several chapters. The delay exists only because the plot needs the misunderstanding to continue.

Readers become frustrated when a simple conversation could solve the central conflict.

How to Fix It

Give the character a strong reason to remain silent.

They may fear punishment, believe they will not be trusted, misunderstand the evidence, or want to protect someone. They might attempt to share the information but be interrupted, captured, or prevented from reaching the right person.

Be careful with repeated interruptions. One interruption may feel natural. Five failed attempts can feel artificial.

The silence should reveal something meaningful about the character, not merely delay the plot.

5. The Timeline Does Not Add Up

A character travels across the country in two hours. A pregnancy lasts eleven months without explanation. A child is the wrong age based on events described earlier. A mystery occurs on Friday, but a later chapter claims the same event happened on Tuesday.

Timeline inconsistencies are especially common in stories with multiple perspectives, flashbacks, or several overlapping subplots.

How to Fix It

Create a story calendar.

Record:

  • The date of each major event
  • Travel time
  • Character ages
  • Birthdays and anniversaries
  • Work or school schedules
  • The length of injuries, illnesses, or pregnancies
  • The number of days between major scenes

Even when dates never appear in the final manuscript, tracking them helps keep the story consistent.

6. Travel Happens Too Quickly

Characters frequently move between cities, countries, planets, or kingdoms without accounting for distance.

This may seem like a minor issue, but impossible travel can affect the entire plot. If the villain needs three days to reach the castle, the protagonist should not make the same trip in an afternoon without an explanation.

How to Fix It

Research realistic travel times and include the delays that matter.

You do not need to describe every minute of the journey. A brief transition may be enough:

By the time they reached the village three days later, their supplies were nearly gone.

When characters travel faster than normal, establish why. They may have access to a private plane, a portal, a faster horse, advanced technology, or a route other characters do not know about.

7. The Villain Could Win but Does Not

The villain captures the protagonist, explains the entire plan, and then leaves the room instead of finishing the job.

This has become such a familiar storytelling device that readers often recognize it immediately.

How to Fix It

Give the villain a reason not to kill or defeat the protagonist.

Perhaps the villain needs information, access, cooperation, or leverage. Maybe killing the protagonist would create political consequences, expose the villain’s identity, or destroy something the villain wants.

The decision should match the villain’s goals and personality. Arrogance can play a role, but it should not be the only explanation every time.

8. The Conflict Depends on an Easily Solved Misunderstanding

Misunderstandings can create effective conflict, especially in romance and family drama. The problem occurs when the conflict could be resolved by one reasonable question.

For example:

“I saw you with her.”

“She is my sister.”

If the characters avoid that conversation for half the book, readers may lose patience.

How to Fix It

Make the misunderstanding emotionally difficult to resolve.

Perhaps the characters do talk, but one of them lies. Maybe past betrayal makes the explanation difficult to believe. The person who could clarify the situation may be unavailable, or the evidence may appear overwhelmingly convincing.

The strongest misunderstandings are supported by emotional wounds, incomplete evidence, and believable assumptions.

9. A Character’s Personality Changes Without Reason

A cautious character suddenly runs into danger. A loyal friend betrays the protagonist with no warning. A selfish person sacrifices everything despite showing no signs of growth.

Characters can change, but that change needs a cause.

How to Fix It

Build a visible character arc.

Plant moments that show the character beginning to question old beliefs or behaviors. Let readers see the internal conflict before the major decision.

A surprising action can still feel believable when it grows from:

  • Fear
  • Love
  • Guilt
  • Trauma
  • Ambition
  • Pressure
  • New information
  • Gradual personal growth

The final choice should feel surprising but inevitable.

10. Injuries Disappear When They Become Inconvenient

A character is badly injured in one chapter and running normally the next morning. Someone suffers a concussion but experiences no symptoms. A character is stabbed, patched up, and immediately returns to a physical fight.

Readers do not expect every story to become a medical textbook, but serious injuries should have consequences.

How to Fix It

Research the injury and decide how it affects the story.

Consider:

  • Pain
  • Blood loss
  • Restricted movement
  • Medication
  • Recovery time
  • Infection
  • Fatigue
  • Scarring
  • Emotional trauma

You may need to reduce the severity of the original injury. A shallow cut may serve the story better than a wound that should require months of recovery.

11. The Authorities Are Ignored Without Explanation

Characters discover a crime, kidnapping, conspiracy, or dangerous threat but never contact the police, school administration, military, or another appropriate authority.

Sometimes avoiding the authorities makes sense. The story simply needs to explain why.

How to Fix It

Establish a believable obstacle.

The authorities may be corrupt, controlled by the villain, unable to act without evidence, or limited by jurisdiction. The protagonist may have a criminal history, fear being blamed, or need to protect someone involved.

Another option is to let the characters contact the authorities and discover that official help is ineffective.

Ignoring the obvious institutional response without explanation creates a plot hole. Addressing it creates conflict.

12. Convenient Skills Appear at the Perfect Moment

During the climax, a character suddenly knows how to fly a plane, disarm a bomb, translate an ancient language, or perform emergency surgery.

This type of unexpected ability often feels like a shortcut.

How to Fix It

Foreshadow the skill before it becomes necessary.

You do not need to announce, “This skill will save everyone later.” Mention it naturally through the character’s job, background, hobbies, family history, or earlier experiences.

For example, a character might complain about taking flying lessons with her father years ago. When she later needs to control a small plane, the ability feels earned rather than convenient.

13. An Important Object Appears or Disappears

The protagonist suddenly has a key, weapon, letter, or piece of evidence that was never introduced. A valuable object vanishes from the story because keeping track of it would complicate the plot.

Objects can create continuity problems just as easily as characters.

How to Fix It

Track important objects through each scene.

Record:

  • Who currently has the object
  • Where it is stored
  • When it changes hands
  • Who knows it exists
  • Whether it has been damaged, copied, hidden, or destroyed

Introduce important objects before the climax. Readers should recognize the item when it becomes significant.

14. The Coincidence Is Too Convenient

Coincidences happen in real life, but too many convenient coincidences weaken a story.

The protagonist happens to overhear the exact conversation she needs. A missing person walks into the same restaurant as the detective. The one person who can solve the problem appears at precisely the right moment.

How to Fix It

Let coincidence create problems rather than solve them.

A chance encounter may begin the story, reveal a threat, or place the protagonist in danger. However, the protagonist’s choices should drive the resolution.

When a coincidence is necessary, connect it to something already established. The detective sees the suspect at the restaurant because both were invited by the same person—not because the universe conveniently placed them together.

15. The Ending Introduces a Solution That Was Never Established

The final battle is lost until a new power, weapon, character, or piece of information suddenly appears and saves everyone.

This is sometimes called a deus ex machina: an unexpected solution that resolves a seemingly impossible problem without adequate setup.

The result may be dramatic, but it rarely feels satisfying.

How to Fix It

Plant the solution earlier in the story.

The reader does not need to understand its full importance, but the necessary pieces should already exist. Introduce the weapon, establish the unusual ability, mention the forgotten passageway, or reveal that another character may be willing to help.

The protagonist should also play an active role in the resolution. The ending is more satisfying when success comes from the protagonist’s decisions, sacrifices, skills, or growth.

How to Find Plot Holes in Your Manuscript

Plot holes can be difficult to see when you have spent months immersed in your story. You know what each character means, why every event happens, and how the fictional world works. Readers only know what appears on the page.

Use these strategies during revision.

Create a Scene-by-Scene Outline

After finishing your draft, summarize every scene in one or two sentences. Include the purpose of the scene, the information revealed, and the decisions each character makes.

This reverse outline can reveal missing steps, repeated events, and unexplained changes.

Track Cause and Effect

Every major event should happen because of something that came before it.

Ask:

  • What caused this event?
  • What changed because of it?
  • Why did the character make this decision?
  • What would happen if this scene were removed?

When events have no clear cause or consequence, the plot may need strengthening.

Review Each Character’s Knowledge

Make a list of what each major character knows at different points in the story. This is particularly helpful for mysteries, thrillers, romantic misunderstandings, and stories with multiple narrators.

Question Convenient Choices

Whenever a character makes an unusual decision, ask whether it serves the character or merely serves the plot.

A strong story forces characters to make difficult but believable choices. A weak plot often requires them to ignore logic.

Ask Someone Else to Read the Story

Beta readers and critique partners can identify gaps that the writer no longer sees.

Ask them to mark any place where they wondered:

  • Why did the character do that?
  • How did they know that?
  • Why didn’t they just call someone?
  • Where did that object come from?
  • How much time has passed?
  • Why did the rules change?

Do not assume every question means you need a long explanation. Sometimes one sentence is enough to close the gap.

Final Thoughts

Not every unanswered question is a plot hole.

Writers can intentionally withhold information to create mystery, tension, or a sequel hook. Readers do not need an explanation for every detail. They do, however, need to believe that the story has an internal logic.

A well-constructed plot does not require characters to make perfect decisions. It requires them to make decisions that are believable based on their knowledge, personalities, fears, and circumstances.

As you revise, focus on cause and effect. Track what your characters know, establish the rules of your story, and make sure major solutions are introduced before they are needed.

Plot holes do not mean your story has failed. They are simply signs that the connection between two parts of the story needs to be strengthened. Once those connections are repaired, your plot will feel more natural, convincing, and satisfying to readers.

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